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Dove: *goes outside and looks around* Hmmmm

Star: *sniffing*

Dove: *walks over to Star* Um..... hello

Star: Huh? W-what are you doing here? Don't you have magic lessons with my mom?

Dove: Um yes but I don't want to do them. And you looked liked you needed somepony to play with.

Star: You should go back probably. My mom doesn't like it when her plans are messed up.

Dove: I'd rather not....

Star: How come?

Dove: Just.... reasons. Anyways, my name's Dove. I already know you since you're the Princess and all.

Star: Oh. Hi Dove.

Dove: I really like your wings *smiles*

Star: Really? Thank you! They're a little big for me

Dove: I think they're magnificent. M-may I feel them? 

Star: Sure

Dove: *pets Star's wings* They're so soft. I really wish I was a pegasus

Star: Why? Magic is really cool

Dove: *shrugs* Wings are pretty and flying seems much more fun. And safe.

Star: Is your mommy a unicorn?

Dove: Both of mine are.

Star: At least you can play with them then...

Dove: Your mom has wings. 

Star: But she doesn't like flying. She was a unicorn first so she likes magic better.

Dove: Oh I see.

Star: I'd play with my Daddy more but he's always working at the guard. 

Dove: Aw, I'm sorry. Have you ever tried flying before?

Star: No. I can't fly by myself yet. I really want to though....

Dove: You'll be able to one day. What were you gonna do outside?

Star: I was gonna try flying on my own but I don't think I can. Oh!

Dove: Hm?

Star: Maybe you can help me!

Dove: H-how?

Star: One time my Mommy used her magic to hold me in the air! It was just like flying!

Dove: Oh, I don't know if that's a good idea... I'm not very good at magic

Star: You don't need to make me go that high. It'll be good practice for both of us!

Dove: I mean...

Star: Let's try! It'll be so cool!

Dove: U-um... okay

Star: Yay this is gonna be so cool!

Dove: Okay... *takes a deep breath* Just.... focus......

Star: ........

Dove: I can't! I don't wanna mess up

Star: You won't mess up. I believe in you 

Dove: A-alright. Focus.... *horn begins to glow*

Star: ......... *gasps* Dove it's working! Look! *hooves leave the ground*

Dove: W-wow! I'm doing it!

Star: Higher, higher!

Dove: *horn glows brighter*

Star: Wow Dove you're really good at this!

Dove: I– Ah!

Star: What's wrong?

Dove: *horn glows red*

Star: Dove? *gets lifted higher* Whoooooooa! Dove you're reaaally good at this! Wheeeeeeeee! I'm going so fast!

Dove: C-can't s-stop...

Star: This is the best!

Dove: h-help....!

Twilight: *runs towards Dove and Star with Annie on her back* Starburst! What are  you doing???

Star: Lookit me fly, Mommy!

Twilight: How? *looks to Dove* Wow Dove, you're doing this? That's impressive

Dove: ack...

Twilight: Dove? Could you lower her down please? Dove?

Dove: .........................

Twilight: *takes Starburst from Dove's control*

Star: Awwwww....

Twilight: You okay, Star?

Star: Mmhm

Dove: *snaps out of it* W-wha *sees Twilight holding Star and backs away* O-oh no. Did I hurt her??? I'm sorry, I'm sorry, I'm sorry, I–

Twilight: She's fine Dove. But how did you do that? Most unicorns your age can't even lift a spoon. I'm very impressed Dove

Annie: That was really cool! Even though I couldn't see *giggles*

Dove: I-I lost control. I could've hurt her......

Twilight: Yes you could have but she's okay and we're all very lucky that that didn't happen. Perhaps you shouldn't use magic on other ponies for now *chuckles*

Dove: I-I could've dropped her, I could've thrown her... it would've been my fault... I'm so sorry–

Twilight: Dove, relax. Breathe, sweetheart. Everything's alright. You're not in trouble, okay? We can go back inside and keep practicing on other things.

Dove: N-no. It's too scary. I want to go home, Princess. Please

Twilight: Dove you have so much potential! You're very strong just like your mother. 

Dove: I don't want to be, Princess. Please let me go home. I'm scared *starts tearing up*

Twilight: Oh Dove come here *pulls Dove under her wing* I'm sorry. We'll go to your house right now. Does that sound good?

Dove: *nods*

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Characters: Next Generation: Starburst by kilala97Next Generation: Anthea by kilala97Next Generation: Dove by kilala97


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:iconspindledee:
SpindleDee Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2017  New Deviant Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Better than the bullshit I can do on paper.
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:iconnunie15:
nunie15 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2017
Scary but cool
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:icondragonart1394:
dragonart1394 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2017   Traditional Artist
Is Dove Bipolar i er does she have split personalty disorder because why does she sometimes have red magic in some of your drawing
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chuck-vic-norris Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2017  Student Digital Artist
In the show, Trixie used an Alicorn Amulet to gain powerful magic and it made her magical aura turn red. in the episode, she challenged Twilight to a magical duel while using the amulet, with the loser being forced to leave Ponyville forever. She was more powerful than Twilight and beat her, but the power corrupted her and made her arrogant and a dictator to Ponyville.

It's likely the power stayed within Trixie and was passed down to Dove.
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dragonart1394 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2017   Traditional Artist
le thanks
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:iconthemysterioussong:
TheMysteriousSong Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2017
It was at this moment dove knew, she nearly fucked up
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:iconkleopatraa15:
kleopatraa15 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
Its cute and very helpful (that`s good when u`r helping someone. *then u`r a Angel*)la in love la in love Sansynyan~! Sansynyan~! But I don`t like when Twilight Sparkle and Flash sentry love each other ,(sorry Flash sentry but) he`s for me stupid.     I like TwidashHeart 3D Heart 3D Heart 3D  because *Rainbow Dash* speaks like a boy and looks like a boy!!!!!!!!!
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DubstepicDJ Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh hell.....
Foxy's Booty Overload (Chat Icon) 
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RainstormOfEquestria Featured By Owner Edited Aug 4, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
hey ki,
u suppose u could show this comment to Lop?
I just wanna apologize for before, I promise, from now on, that i'll only send one comment per post.
also, I've been practicing soccer a lot lately, so I haven't been allowed to check deviant art a lot lately, so I didn't see your reply.
cross my hear and hope to fly, stick a cupcake in my eye.
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:iconjoanie297:
Joanie297 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2016
Daw Starburst was just the cutest wittwe pegasus when she was a babbu yes she wasssss
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:iconalanapallaton:
AlanaPallaton Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2016  Student Artist
Awwwwwwww..... :3 So cute, 
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:iconcommonfire:
CommonFire Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Awww!
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:iconthebanaynay:
TheBanaynay Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
poor dovey dove... i just wanna cuddle her and love her and tell hr she doesn't have to  be a unicorn.
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VanillaGrimCreations Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2016  Student General Artist
I love how you drew the two panels c: Dove is by far my favorite character!
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:iconfunsizefluffy:
Funsizefluffy Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2016
That red magic looks familiar... (gasps) Headcanon! Even though Trixie took off the Alicorn Amulet, a small bit of that magic remained in her, only resurfacing when Trixie overworks herself on a magic show (which thankfully doesn't happen often). The magic was transferred to Dove through birth, only it's more prominent since both her parents are unicorns.

But hey, just a headcanon
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:icontomo-dachii:
tomo-dachii Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2016
Kilala has actually confirmed that headcanon ^^
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:iconfunsizefluffy:
Funsizefluffy Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2016
Huh? Where?
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:icontomo-dachii:
tomo-dachii Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2016
kilala97.deviantart.com/art/Co…

Right at the bottom, are states that several people figured out her affliction was from the amulet :D
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Funsizefluffy Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2016
Oh... Well, I feel silly. :blush:
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:icontomo-dachii:
tomo-dachii Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2016
It's okay, it was pretty to miss since it's so far at the bottom, and it wasn't very recent at all either, I'm surprised I remembered it at all ^^;
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Cynderthedragon5768 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Is dove not French anymore??? If not that's like removing a essential thing to her character D;
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Rainbowwave1 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2016  Student Photographer
She went to a boarding school in Prance (France) since Twilight's lessons weren't really working and that's where she got her accent and stuff, but not till later.
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Cynderthedragon5768 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh, that makes sense
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HattertheThird Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2016  Student General Artist
*reads story*

*Gently inserts a comma between the phrases "Wow Dove" and " You're doing this"*

*galavants off in the grammar nazi Volkswagen of Justice *
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:iconkilalaaa:
kilalaaa Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2016  Student Filmographer
Oh thank~
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:iconhatterthethird:
HattertheThird Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2016  Student General Artist
No problem!

*leaps out of the Grammar Nazi Volkswagen and into the GrammarCopter*
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Jennifurrrr Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
XD same

Ialwayswanttobeabletocorrectpeoplewithoutbeingaprick
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:iconkajukenbo1:
kajukenbo1 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Is her dark magic a result of her mom's use of the alicorn amulet? Something like that must have left some curse or permanent mark on Trixie.
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ButterballLover Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
the gif looks like Dove was gonna slam Star into the ground, and all i could think was "Let the bodies hit the FLOOOOOOOOOOOR"
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:iconcatherinemires:
CatherineMires Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2016  Student General Artist
Here what I thought:

EVERYBODY DO THE FLOP!!
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:iconblastersky:
blastersky Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2016  Student Digital Artist
CRIES I love Dove and I feel sorry for her... I hope that maybe one day she can be purged of those dark magic effects if possible :(
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:iconnakuru-nebelung:
Nakuru-Nebelung Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2016
Why does her magic and eye turn red?
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:iconniclove:
NicLove Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Alicorn Amulet
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:iconsnowylilacs:
SnowyLilacs Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2016
we think Trixie's blood was tainted from the Alicorn Amulet,thus passing on to poor Dove. Hence why she can not control herself
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KingTumult Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Annie: That was really cool! Even though I couldn't see *giggles*

Brook: I saw it all. I'd say I saw it with my own two eyes.... IF I HAD ANY! YOHOHOHOHO
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Hayoni123 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2016
who is brook?
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KingTumult Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Brook Icon OP 1 
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Hayoni123 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2016
k
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:iconniclove:
NicLove Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
The skeleton !?
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:iconoverlordscorpion:
Wow.

Does really no one realize Dove's magic is corrupt??

Not even freakin' Twilight can tell? :o

Poor Dove. She's a time bomb and apparently nobody notices.
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SnowyLilacs Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2016
Star wouldn't know really cause she's not a unicorn,and well Twilight is Twilight,she's been oblivious to things in the past.
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:iconjelwolf:
Jelwolf Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
Poor little Dovey and Star




I ship them so hard
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Lunardive Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
I feel so bad for dove. She is definitely my favorite character of yours personality wise. I feel like I can relate to her as well. Me having anxiety and her having magic issues. Most of the problems she has I can easily feel and understand. Plus her mothers are definitely a terrific pair. Her desighn and everything just makes me love her even more. I really hope you do more on dove.
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berrytone Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2016
The art is great! But I think there should be more resolution in the dialogue. these images are as much about Star as they are about dove. Does twilight scold Starburst, welcome her back home, or ignore her again?
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SerenityDragonwing Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
What exactly is Dove's magic problem?
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ScarletLightning565 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
As I understand it, Dove has a residual effect of the Alicorn Amulet. That's why her magic is so powerful yet uncontrollable.
 Perhaps because of this or something else, she wishes to identify as a pegasus rather than a unicorn.

Kilala has several other Dove stories in her dA, I highly suggest reading them.
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The-Doctor-Kami Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
something to do with the alicorn amulet i think
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jumpitydude Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2016
Hmm... Makes me wonder how Twilight would have reacted if Dove HAD hurt Star...
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:icontomo-dachii:
tomo-dachii Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2016
twilight can't you see the child is scared relax about her "potential" dang
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:iconbobshmit13:
bobshmit13 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2016  Student Writer
Holy crap, blacking out must have scared the shit out of the poor little thing and all anyone can see is the potential in her, not the danger.
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